Revision Remedy

Investment: $2000 for YA/Adult up to 100K words, ($1200 for Middle Grade up to 50K words)

(Revision Remedy is a new service with introductory pricing. Price will increase to $2500 for YA/AD and $1500 for MG in Oct. 2024.)

Time Frame: 4 weeks

Prerequisite: completed manuscript or book proposal

This book coaching option is for writers who crave clear direction on how to take their work to the next level.

Revision Remedy is more than a manuscript evaluation. In addition to receiving professional feedback on your writing, you’ll gain clarity and come away with a clear, step-by-step personalized plan of action to guide your revision.

I’ll read your entire manuscript or book proposal and provide you with an editorial letter summarizing what is working well and what areas could be further developed. In addition, I’ll help you interpret feedback you have received in the past and I’ll create a step-by-step revision plan for you to follow. I’ll even give you inline comments on your first 20 pages so you have a clearer sense of what will be expected from you as you revise at the line level. We’ll wrap up with a private video call to address any questions you may still have.

***Revision Remedy includes a manuscript evaluation that addresses developmental edits and suggestions. Inline comments are only included for the first 20 pages.

What’s Included:

  • A read-through of your full manuscript or book proposal

  • An editorial letter highlighting strengths and areas to develop

  • Inline comments on your first 20 pages

  • A clear plan of action to guide your revision

  • Help interpreting feedback you’ve received in the past

  • One 50-minute private video call to discuss the feedback and answer questions you still have